Heightening and Tightening … Word Tweaking. I’m eyeballs deep in edits and revisions and loving it!

Getting it right ... telling the story that wants to be told!

Getting it right … telling the story that wants to be told!

I’ve been getting in some happy editing this morning. I went through the same scene I was attacking yesterday and re-tweaked it. Again. I think I’m happy with it now. It’s kind of one of those pivotal scenes where it sets up a whole bunch of life that’s coming down the pike for poor Ivy, so I wanted to make sure I got it right. I feel like I like it way better now.  :o)

In my books there always seems to be a scene or two where I work them and rework them and rewrite them and revise them and beat the shit out of them over and over again … and even after the book goes to print, I’m still thinking about that damn scene. Well … the scene this morning is most likely the one for this book. But who knows … I’m feeling pretty good about it now. I got the emotion in there. And the tone and the description. And the set-up — Poor Ivy — it’s in there, and she’s never going to see it coming until it’s too late.

Gotta get back at it.  Just wanted to update you.  Hope you have a wonderful day!!!

While you wait … TODAY ONLY … How about some chocolaty romantic reading fun to celebrate my anniversary and birthday!

Dip & Devour Front Cover

Today to help celebrate my wedding anniversary with Paul and my upcoming birthday, I thought we’d break out the chocolate (my favorite way to celebrate!!!) with a free Kindle ebook copy of Dip & Devour!!!

Hope you’ll join me for this oldie but goodie chocolaty romantic comedy fun read!!!

Please help spread the word and share the fun!!!  I’d be ever so grateful!!!  Thank you in advance!!!

Here’s the direct link on Amazon: http://www.amazon.com/dp/B007WMXBE6

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